Atreyee’s "The Soul Drenched in Love"
the Soul drenched in love
seeks nothing- gives everything
finds Buddha within
(c) Atreyee
wandering, my spirit spreads its wings
struggling to reach eternity
sharing with trepidation
to Carpe Diem's Haiku
An aside: like the butterfly emerging,
I am taking a risk with writing tan rengas.
As a first grade teacher,
I knew the importance of making
my classroom safe so that students
would risk being wrong.
It's so much easier to teach a concept
than it is to practice it.
An aside: like the butterfly emerging,
I am taking a risk with writing tan rengas.
As a first grade teacher,
I knew the importance of making
my classroom safe so that students
would risk being wrong.
It's so much easier to teach a concept
than it is to practice it.
Interesting lines.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteSee your 'wings spreading' ~ soaring ~ wonderful ~ thanks, carol, xxxx
ReplyDeleteps. true indeed ~ very easy to teach ~ to practice what i teach is sometimes hard ~ human condition ~
indeed, it is, Carol
Deletewonderful indeed! I am off to read more about Tan Renga - you have now introduced me to something totally new to me! thank you
ReplyDeleteYou're so welcome, Hettienne, I have just heard too and I'm fascinated with it. But it is so new that it's arduous for me, but I think it's worth it.
Deletethe flight to reach eternity - beautiful completion, Norma.
ReplyDeletethank you.
DeleteThis is a lovely completion:-)
ReplyDeleteI'm honored, Atreyee, with your comment.
DeleteWhat a wonderful, spiritual, completion of the Tan Renga Norma. The flight to Eternity ... wow!
ReplyDeleteNicely done, and I will tell you that the Carpe Diem poets are a kind, encouraging lot. Also, be aware that as many of us write the prompts every day, we know that some days are more inspired than others. I myself only wrote my first Tan Renga a few months ago due to Carpe Diem. Welcome.
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